Give me your Suggestions and Critique Please

Howdy Guys I’m Begener In VFX, I made this Impact by Following One tutorial, I Added some modifications myself on It, are you able to give me your opinion on it? What Can I enhance on this? Right here is the Hyperlink Dropbox – ORB Closing.mp4 – Simplify your life thanks In Advance.

Hey!
I might attempt
There’s a lot of occurring, so will attempt to deal with essentially the most general issues that would assist!

1. Fades In/Out – Nearly each a part of that impact is showing/disappearing nearly immediately. In actuality it not often occurs (you may see that smoke simply dissolves by mixing with air, rain drops cut up into smaller elements and soke, even thunder leaves sort of a picture of itself after it disappears). So attempt to make them both dissolve with alpha or by some texture (like a noise)
2. Motion – The best way the orb and small particles transfer appears not pure both. I’d attempt smoothing it a bit and add some selection with a subltle curl noise.
3. Dynamics – The construct up appears fairly linear – I’d attempt making it in order that motion on the very starting of all the things is basically sluggish and it builds as much as sooner and sooner until the explosion occurs! It can add quite a lot of momentum to whole impact. Then having explosion be the highest velocity second and all the things slowing down once more.
4. Sorting issues – That orb appears to be rendering behind the factor on the bottom, which makes it look sort of bizarre (you may play with sorting choices)
5. Consideration – Ensure that a part of an impact you wish to put person’s consideration on is contrasted to the remaining. Proper now my eyes are principally wanting on the floor factor and switching to orb, as a result of I’m unsure what to deal with. If you would like your construct as much as deal with the orb, then make it extra emissive and look much less static and desaturate the bottom a bit. If you would like the other then do the other

I actually like the colours and textures you’ve used. This impact positively has quite a lot of potential!

I’d additionally recommend beginning small. So as an example focus first on solely influence, or solely construct up and simply when you’re absolutely happy with them, then transfer out to subsequent a part of the impact. It makes it simpler to work on (that’s how I all the time strategy creating results)

thanks lots on your suggestions. It’s actually useful for me. I’ll attempt to try this all factor to do as a lot as I Can and get again to you right here. thanks lots.

Certain! Shall be glad to assist additional

Thanks lots From the underside of my coronary heart.

My greatest suggestion –while you continue learning vfx and any instruments associated to it– is to observe this on the common till it turns into a core reminiscence: 12 Ideas of Animation (Official Full Collection) – YouTube

these ideas for animation are tremendous necessary for VFX (some rather less than others) and can vastly enhance your expertise over time

Thanks lots, I noticed at ones however I believe I’ve to maintain Reversion of them